Release #1 - ZUMOMON

The world is filled with data drives that contain mythical monsters that people use to battle each other for sport, they call the game ZUMOMON. Our story follows a kid named Shoto joins a ZUMOMON Tournament to win a chance to be in the next ZUMOMON Championship.

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1: ZUMOMON

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KenBee313 1 year ago

very fun first issue

MrKha 1 year ago

I'm gonna be honest, and I know this will sound harsh but the artstyle could use a major improvement regarding anatomy, perspective, shading and all that. To me, personally, it just doesn't attract me that much. Also, the background seems really out of place in some panels and doesn't match your artstyle at all to the point where I genuinely thought they were traced over.

However, I can honestly get behind the artstyle in favour of the story cause so far it seems pretty interesting. Aside from a few typos in the dialog here and there, I love how it's progressing so far and I'm definitely a fan of the Zumomon designs. Diamond Knight has gotta be my favourite.

That's how far my critique goes. Keep up the good work, gradually improve on the as you go on with the story and I can't wait for the next release

Keyaruki 1 year ago

This is pretty peak, perfectly captures the energy and feel of old school Game Anime like Beyblade or Bakugan in combination with the artstyle, it just goes great together