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52: Excuse
141 views • Sep 30, 2023
Mihku learns more about the attack on Honeypass
pbox

pbox 1 year ago

I found the use of the environment really powerful this chapter. I kept thinking a lot about the island as a location during the last scene, it's so beautiful and peaceful but also isolating in ways that are hard to put into words! I loved Tae and Mihku's exchange at the end. Tae clearly struggles so hard with what to say in these kinda situations. I guess there isn't really anything to say, but she still is doing all that she can to be comforting to Mihku. It's a really lovely moment but also man it's a lot 😔

swordheart

portocor 1 year ago

@pbox YEAH, i really wanted to capture like just how big this island is and despite the beauty of it - it's still such a lonely place. i feel like in a twisted little way, everyone on the island really just has the best intentions. they want mihku to be safe and okay, just as much as they want one another to - but it all just sort of feeds into this cycle of sticking their heads in the sand and refusing to truly acknowledge their hurt. mihku is there to challenge that.

jascopper5

jascopper5 1 year ago

I liked your storytelling. that panel of angry internal monologue text was effective. Your landscapes this section were great.

swordheart

portocor 1 year ago

@jascopper5 thank you so so much! i really appreciate the input! :3c