The year is 2119. The world recovers from a societal collapse after over a century, and the city of New Orleans has become a melting pot for many who are looking for a new beginning, and a brighter future. Valorie Taylor is their latest tourist. After leaving her past behind in Los Angeles, she has wandered from state to state looking for a chance to start over. What she believes will be another destination may end up becoming her new home, for better or for worse.
Thank you! I wouldn't say I've figured it out, but I read through it a lot in my head, just to make sure it sounds good if you were to say it out loud. I also take a lot of notes from films and TV shows I watch like The Sopranos. Also, don't be so harsh on yourself. I enjoy the dialogue in E-Gor!
Same, though I act out scenes right before bed instead lol. I recommend giving Reservoir Dogs a watch. I don't know if it'll influence your writing style, but it did influence mine, and is one of the films I always keep in mind when writing dialogue.
GarzaGoose-Comics 1 year ago
Love the dialogue desu. How'd you figure it out? My stuff sounds forced and unnatural lmao.
clunkerton 1 year ago
Thank you! I wouldn't say I've figured it out, but I read through it a lot in my head, just to make sure it sounds good if you were to say it out loud. I also take a lot of notes from films and TV shows I watch like The Sopranos. Also, don't be so harsh on yourself. I enjoy the dialogue in E-Gor!
GarzaGoose-Comics 1 year ago
Thanks! Hmm maybe I should start studying more haha, I usually act out scenes while driving. Typically screaming until my throat is sore lmao.
clunkerton 1 year ago
Same, though I act out scenes right before bed instead lol. I recommend giving Reservoir Dogs a watch. I don't know if it'll influence your writing style, but it did influence mine, and is one of the films I always keep in mind when writing dialogue.
GarzaGoose-Comics 1 year ago
Yea! I'll give it a watch then. Honestly anything that's well written will surely help. Glad to know I'm not the only one acting out scenes haha.