
clunkerton
clunkerton
Your dialogue is just as good! I'm glad my quality hasn't diminished. I don't normally like writing F-bombs, but for wise guys like Hilton, it makes the most sense.
GarzaGoose-Comics
:D idk, your dialog is real smooth. It let's me move from bubble to bubble with ease. I still trip up with mine lol, but I'm working on that xd
clunkerton
Good to know it looks good vertically! Since the comic doesn't follow a traditional webtoon format, I was worried people wouldn't enjoy it as much.
GarzaGoose-Comics
Hell yea man, it reads great, in print of course it'd be a crime not to use traditional format.
clunkerton
Lol, yeah these guys are lacking in the brains department. Stay tuned! c:
GarzaGoose-Comics
Ye I will! :D
Uploaded a short intermission while the first act of Part 2 gets colored. Release date for Part 2 is looking to be before the end of the month!
clunkerton
Same, though I act out scenes right before bed instead lol. I recommend giving Reservoir Dogs a watch. I don't know if it'll influence your writing style, but it did influence mine, and is one of the films I always keep in mind when writing dialogue.
GarzaGoose-Comics
Yea! I'll give it a watch then. Honestly anything that's well written will surely help. Glad to know I'm not the only one acting out scenes haha.
GarzaGoose-Comics
Fucking love the color palette, sorry for the low read, I like to take my time haha.
clunkerton
Thank you! It's all good, I'm just glad you're enjoying it. :)