South Korea has fallen into darkness after the knocker killer appeared, the Fbi and the Nsa have sent over 50 of their best agents but now half of them have been murdered. Now a meeting is being held to figure out the case.
You go right into the story, a bit slower approach, less wordy at first, would help. You make your own art so I know it must take a lot to produce more pages to spread the story out at a less hectic pace!
Buildingofgrod 3 months ago
Great so far! keep it up!
Agentny003 3 months ago
Very impressive. Keep it up. 👍
AjtheWriter 3 months ago
@Agentny003: thxs
GlidinYeti 3 months ago
I like ryos design a lot, reminds me of my mc.
Honotrable 3 months ago
Cool
Docwyoming 3 months ago
You go right into the story, a bit slower approach, less wordy at first, would help. You make your own art so I know it must take a lot to produce more pages to spread the story out at a less hectic pace!
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Docwyoming 3 months ago
You are good, please just see that as an amateur's opinion.
JanneKarneus 2 months ago
It's quite cool so far! I'd say maybe to clean up the visual presentation of the words a bit more
But otherwise, nice work!
CastingEvasiveJester 2 months ago
Really enjoying this comic so far! The story's off to a great start, and the art and colors look amazing.
MikeDistantSamurai 2 months ago
@Honotrable: It’s super cute, isn’t it?
PaigeVision 2 months ago
Great work! Now, as all of us were thinking, smash or pass, Elizabeth?
Julkip 2 months ago
@PaigeVision: we? Ain't no we here.
Dark-Healer 2 months ago
@PaigeVision: pass
Mohsan 2 months ago
@PaigeVision: smash
LathunderGnome 2 months ago
I like your drawing style. I prefer this Chap to chapter 1.
Xiong 2 months ago
Good 👍
Xiong 2 months ago
@LathunderGnome: I feel that it was so rushed, the story
Duchessocthestars 2 months ago
@PaigeVision: really? stfu!
MasteringAdiral 2 months ago
@PaigeVision: smash!
Tiveeye 2 months ago
ok