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Release #18 - Chapter 18: The Promise

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Episode 18
Chapter 18: The Promise
NSFW 91 views • Jun 21, 2024
Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

The Honeymoon phase…

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

I dearly wish to read a story where when a man says he’ll kill homself to force his partner to stay she calls him on his bluff and tells him she doesn’t give a shit.

Monroe knows she has a problem, but it’s hard breaking those patterns. even when you’re aware of them

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

“I’ll kill myself if you leave”
Do it, pussy

CharlieDVan

CharlieDVan 1 year ago

@Laylabelle97: "I'll kill myself "
then perish

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

ohh, hot milf Monroe

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

I’m also glad Dave died

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

this was shorter and had a more optimistic ending than I thought. it makes sense this is the framing device

CharlieDVan

CharlieDVan 1 year ago

@Laylabelle97: it only had 18 chapters, but I enjoyed working on this. a lot of the story is bleak, especially chapters likd 11-17. but i wanted to give a hopeful ending

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

he has a lot of nerve to ask for trust from her.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

threating to kill yourself if someone leaves you is really low and you basically take them as hostage.

CharlieDVan

CharlieDVan 1 year ago

@lennonade1964: Monroe should have been like "okay do it then"

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

that is good that she moved on and found Darcy. I cant believe Dave has been dead 24 years!

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

it was a fun read and im really glad you told the prequel stuff too. it's good she got a good ending!

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

I really appreciate you as an artist and you tell really good stories. I cant wait for your next story!!

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

@CharlieDVan: right? she should have let him OD

Linwelly

Linwelly 1 year ago

that was a wild ride through Mon's younger years, it was a good thing I already knew where she would be in the end mentally and in life, but the grown up kids was a nice twist

CharlieDVan

CharlieDVan 1 year ago

@Linwelly: thanks for reading!

Wirecats

Wirecats 1 year ago

another great story. interesting to see the moments where Dave MIGHT have gone the other way. clearly he didn't, and like the twins, I shed no tears for him. Monroe clearly ended up a good mom too

CharlieDVan

CharlieDVan 1 year ago

@Wirecats: thanks for reading! I'm currently working on another prequel where we explore Darcy's youth and his upbringing, his complex relationship with his brother, and all his loveless relationships!