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Release #1 - Chapter 1- Prologue

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When Maggey's parents are kidnapped, she sets out on an adventure with a man named Feel to rescue them.

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Episode 1
Chapter 1- Prologue
293 views • Sep 05, 2025
Maggey meets a mysterious man after her parents are kidnapped by a unknown group.
MikoDoodles

MikoDoodles 5 months ago

Hi! I really like the art in this one. Would it be okay for me to give you some suggestions? I think the panel to panel storytelling rocks but there are a couple of relatively simple tweaks you could use to make this even cooler

MrSoggyPants

MrSoggyPants 5 months ago

@MikoDoodles: I'm in the middle of the next chapter, so any feedback you have would definitely be appreciated :)

MrSoggyPants

MrSoggyPants 5 months ago

@snow122: Currently in the middle of chapter 2 :)

MrSoggyPants

MrSoggyPants 5 months ago

@snow122: Writing and art are both done by myself. (i'll take your comment as a compliment, though.)

MikoDoodles

MikoDoodles 4 months ago

@MrSoggyPants sorry for the late reply
I think your sequential art is really good and works well at telling the story, I think that some stuff is unnecessarily overexplained.the speech bubbles could also sometimes be a bit bigger, because sometimes they were a bit illegible. Overall good work that only needs some tweaks to get better.