Otabushi
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After completing another murder, the mercenary Sitt spends time in the tavern and has fun. But a random fight with a stranger...
Purpello
This is interesting, first of all it's really impressive for you to create this after a year of practice, great job. I do have some opinions on the manga that I hope are alright to share; Look out for the tones of light you use as there are parts where the focus is off, Probably go over the dialogue a bit as it is confusing at times, and I found the pacing to be a bit fast. Hoping this feedback is useful and once again great job I'm excited to see more!
OtaBushi
Dear Purpello,
We are immensely grateful for your interest in “Black Sword”. Each reader adds to our excitement and motivation!
Regarding your comment, we deeply value constructive feedback. It’s an essential part of our growth and improvement. We assure you that your insights will be thoroughly reviewed with our artist, Milgray. Your effort to share your thoughts with us is greatly appreciated.
In anticipation of your continued support, we eagerly invite you to explore the second chapter as soon as it’s released!