It’s fantastic to see Echoes Of The Shieldbearer out in the world, and I want to encourage you to keep going. The artwork feels like a current strength. There’s a clear grasp of basic anatomy and rendering, and I think there’s room to push things further by playing with angles, cinematography, and panel layout.
As a reader, though, I struggled to connect with this one — the story felt vague to me, and I found myself wanting a lot more information as things progressed.
lukewoutermckoy 3 days ago
It’s fantastic to see Echoes Of The Shieldbearer out in the world, and I want to encourage you to keep going. The artwork feels like a current strength. There’s a clear grasp of basic anatomy and rendering, and I think there’s room to push things further by playing with angles, cinematography, and panel layout.
As a reader, though, I struggled to connect with this one — the story felt vague to me, and I found myself wanting a lot more information as things progressed.
Natius 2 days ago (edited 2 days ago)
Thankyou for the well thought out Review I appreciate it. I hope to have it improve as I go along with both art and story.