Nakryzium
Stenwfe
@Nace: I've already read all available chapters (to 6). Dear creator, you seem to be so concerned about your art style and comments so here's one.
Focusing only on the 1st chapter:
- Drawing: I really like that borders of things are cutted from the background by white and black thick lines. Connected with shadowing made by thin lines it make the picture clear and easy-to-read. It takes a lot of time to design picture like that but then the eye knows where it should be most focused.
- Speech bubbles: could you take care of text visibility? Here sometimes text is pixelated (the quality of line can change after sending file to website or while converting from example .kra extentsion to .pdf).
Its only my opinion, but I appreciate when creator make text easy-to-read without forcing me to zoom in the picture (the left bubble from pre-previous chapter could be a little bigger for example).
Focusing on the whole series:
I think that chapter names should be consistent (now here is 1...., 2...., 3...., ch-..., ?..., ch 5:..., ch6 ...). Also there are 3 title images. I do not see any connection between image and chapter's plot.
I hope that the comics will have an interesting continuation. I like experimental comics, so I enjoy this one. Good luck with being creative and consistent with updating your comic.
Nace
thanks for your feedback veiwer.. i will definately take this into account... im just trying to settle and experiment things and doing what seems to work... about the covers, i was experimenting them too... the recent cover you will know what it means... thanks again!!!