Mudkhal
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Yun, a Chinese Opera rising star, is set on handing out a fan letter to her favourite band, lead by the guitarist Xinyan, ready...
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Kaeya and Itto meet Xinyan at her workplace and discuss the possibility of a stalker tailing her.
Juliette
Whoa this part was intense but funny too the dialogue feels so natural what inspired you to add the stalker plot
Khal
Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the dialogue! Since I had planned this teaser to be an introduction to the main character of the first chapter, Yun, I wanted to make sure to find a way to introduce her while also not making them meet at all, as I wanted to preserve that first encounter for the climax of the following chapter. I love playing around misuderstandings in a fun way and so I thought her being mistaken for a stalker would be an interesting hook! This plot point will come around most likely in future chapters :)