Foy Davis Art
KeillyP
I felt for poor Dorothy when she realised Tyler didn't ask her out on a date and I loved how the explosion at the end made her whole world burst into colour. The monkeys making others turn into them via cuts/their blood reminds me of the Fringe porcupine virus and the rage virus in 28 Days Later
foydavisart
Keilly! Thanks for reading! You picked up on a lot of elements here. I definitely had a rage virus/Fringe infection in mind with the monkeys and how they "recruit" other monkeys (side note, I'm still bummed we didn't see Seth's acting chops in a full-blown porcupine transformation, but I'm also glad he got to stay human.) A friend convinced me to consider having the otherworldly color "explode" onto the page, and I loved that, since Dorothy's world will never be the same. I love that you picked up on that metaphor!
foydavisart
Thank you so much, Panda - I'm thrilled to hear you're enjoying it! I posted the second part just a few minutes ago, so I'd love to hear what you think! ;)
mlayne
The monkey is scary. Love this so far!





