FifiMangaka
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Rou and Fig's duo becomes a trio as Kenzi Akimoto joins the Regulation. With permission to use the full extent of their Augur...
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Kenzi Akimoto, the self-described "Vigilante" of Glory Peak, confronts Drendith Nosferi's troupe as they attempt to obliterate...
ExchangingConvolutedCretin
Cool idea to have this chapter focus mainly on the 3rd girl unlike the 1st chapter where you had to introduce the 2 main girlies, the main villain as well as the story(it was quite much to get through).
I think you could do a better job at your expositions. The dialogue sometimes comes off unnatural. If you're revealing information during/about an action scene you could employ a "show don't tell" technique(EG. when the slice stack has to effect on the antagonist).
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Captain Rou and Agent Fig are on a mission to hunt down the dangerous Circus Ringmaster, Drendith Nosferi. Nothing goes as they...
YeOldeFifi
@snow122: Thank you so much!! šš Currently Iām just working on YOT š
YeOldeFifi
@snow122: thank you! I draw all the artwork myself! š
YeOldeFifi 1 year ago
@ConservingOrangeChopstick: šāØš³
YeOldeFifi 1 year ago
@dfang37: thank you!! š