Excalibear
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FiaP
eh, it's not great, you could do better to more a JoJo type comic, and the test is formated weird and hard to track
Excalibear
@FiaP: Hmm, what would you recommend to improve it?
SmirkingGreyNavigator 3 months ago
I can definitely see the improvement between the prolouge and the first chapter! Can't wait to see how the story evolves
Excalibear 3 months ago
@SmirkingGreyNavigator: Thank you! I think we'll only see more improvement from here, if I do say do myself