ASH Comics
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The devastating conclusion to the Lemonade series.
Lemonade follows a father and daughter struggling to survive in a world...
4 pages
(FREE)
Lemonade follows a father and daughter struggling to survive in a world ravaged by climate collapse. The father searches for a...
4 pages
(FREE)
Lemonade follows a father and daughter struggling to survive in a world ravaged by climate collapse. The father searches for a...
RevolvingShadowyPoodle 3 months ago
This Is a great little story so far! This is just my opinion, but I feel breaking the story in chapters is breaking the flow a bit. Also we don't spend hardly anytime with the Characters before the chapter ends. I understand what your trying to do it feels serialised when comics where in newspapers. These three chapters should have been combined into one and given the characters and the situation they're in, more breathing room. I want to feel something with the Characters but we leave too quickly. I really liked your book but it feels like it's lacking imo.
ASH-Comics 2 months ago
Thanks for taking the time to read, I really appreciate your review!