@Denno

Thank you for the feedback. Regarding the pacing, sometimes I extend it precisely to give the feeling that more time is passing, or to slow down time and build up the hype, using those extra seconds to better hold onto a revelation or particular phrase. If you also think it's too much, I'll work on it and try to find a suitable balance. Thanks again!

Maybe if you could point out a specific moment where you found the spacing excessive, I would appreciate it. I could understand better! Thank you :)

Thank you for your advice! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Honestly, regarding the color scheme, I don't use blacks and grays, I always bring shadows onto the cool colors, but you'r right! The first chapters are the ones I've drawn a bit worse, but in the upcoming ones, you'll see a significant improvement on these aspects :D

I understand the reasoning behind the clichè of dead parent; the story is still long, and the mysteries and reasons behind the death will have a much more significant impact than it currently seems. However, I can certainly understand the criticism about the cliché.

I will also pay attention to point 5 that you described.

Thank you very much again for the time you've taken to read my story and help me! :D
If you have anything else to advise me on, I would be grateful :)

Hi everyone, I'd love to receive advice and feedback on my first webcomic series!

NO SURRENDER:Year 2155, the world has been revolutionized by the war against A.I. The Gogering, a new martial art that use futuristic technologies to fuse machine and man, has emerged as the most acclaimed sport worldwide. Determined to become the undisputed champion, Jani must face not only the strongest warriors but also his inner demons, questioning everything he believes in, to uncover the truth in an environment that conceals something much darker within its depths 

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Thank you! whish you the best :D

Hi, i'm Denno, and i'm a Mangaka teacher in a school in Italy.

i'm just joined Globalcomix hoping this space can make my webcomic more popular.

NO SURRENDER: Year 2155, the world has been revolutionized by the war against A.I. The Gogering, a new martial art that use futuristic technologies to fuse machine and man, has emerged as the most acclaimed sport worldwide. Determined to become the undisputed champion, Jani must face not only the strongest warriors but also his inner demons, questioning everything he believes in, to uncover the truth in an environment that conceals something much darker within its depth.

It's a shonen set in a cyberpunk world!

-----> https://globalcomix.com/c/no-surrender <-------

hope you'll like it :D

thanks for your support! wish you the best