Hey everyone, my name is Andrew Rodriguez, but Andy is fine. After many years of writing, and a couple years of drawing, I’ve put out the first two chapters of my series about a trucker with a dark past, and a bodacious hitchhiker traveling across the desert to deliver a box of...


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re: CARGO!: Seeking brutally honest feedback on my first release
Thank you J.O.K for the feedback and for taking the time to read! In the comic, Max and Isaac discuss their usual cargo (Guns, drugs, stolen goods), Max is basically a smuggler. But the cargo for this story is a twist and so I wouldn’t spoil it. I’m glad the style was interesting to you.

re: CARGO!: Seeking brutally honest feedback on my first release
Hey there! I noticed your reply was one of the first positive ones I got and I believed you followed as well so big thank you for that. Yes it is a difficult Thing to break into for sure, but I'll just be patient and keep at it.
You make a great point with opening with less exposition. Perhaps I could add a quick scene in the beginning with action...

re: CARGO!: Seeking brutally honest feedback on my first release
Great! Thanks for letting me know! Hope you enjoy the story!

re: CARGO!: Seeking brutally honest feedback on my first release
Hi Zmax, thanks for the response. That issue with the loading is unusual, however, I did save each file as a PNG, so they are larger files as I did not want compression loss. I hope you are able to return to it and read the rest. Thank you so much and I’m glad you enjoy the artwork.

Hey everyone, my name is Andrew Rodriguez, but Andy is fine. After many years of writing, and a couple years of drawing, I’ve put out the first two chapters of my series about a trucker with a dark past, and a bodacious hitchhiker traveling across the desert to deliver a box of...