@Nonobi

I am drawing a yaoi comic and I would like some feedback story wise. I think that graphically it slowly gets better but if you can give a feedback on the drawing too that would be great!!!!
I am giving the link even though it is here, do I have to do that? https://globalcomix.com/c/by-next-morning-men-will-have-descended-into-madness-againhttps://globalcomix.com/c/by-next-morning-men-will-have-descended-into-madness-again
I am open to constructive criticism!