Your story writing is so amazing, and I noticed how during the beginning of the chapter there’s red blue and green in the sky and those are the colors of the gods, super awesome and subtle visual storytelling. You make them just subtle enough to the point where a reader gets a sense of accomplishment when they notice these details, definitely a trait of a great writer, I can’t wait to see where this story takes us.
garriegarrison 6 months ago
Your story writing is so amazing, and I noticed how during the beginning of the chapter there’s red blue and green in the sky and those are the colors of the gods, super awesome and subtle visual storytelling. You make them just subtle enough to the point where a reader gets a sense of accomplishment when they notice these details, definitely a trait of a great writer, I can’t wait to see where this story takes us.
THEDoigster 6 months ago
@garriegarrison: crazy
Datartguy 4 months ago
I do like the nod to the Shinto creation myth
THEDoigster 4 months ago
@Datartguy: thank you