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Episode 1
Prologue
768 views • Jan 09, 2026
Q1l1nagape

Q1l1nagape 4 days ago

Shalom!

I’m from Indonesia, and I recently read your comic. I really enjoyed it! The worldbuilding is fascinating, and I especially love how you portray Jesus Christ and God the Father 😇 (though where is the Holy Spirit? 🕊 Don’t forget Him! 🗿).

I also find the concept of humanity becoming fallen beings very interesting. And wow, how many planets has God created in your setting? I’m curious about that.

I hope you don’t mind a small theological observation. Please take this in a friendly spirit, because I genuinely enjoy your work and only want to contribute to a thoughtful discussion. I’m not a teacher or an authority—just a fellow Christian who wants to help ensure that theological ideas are presented as clearly as possible.

From my understanding, if Taleh is intended to represent Jesus Christ Himself, there may be a theological issue worth considering. In historic Christian theology, Jesus Christ could not sin. Since He is truly God, and God is perfectly holy, sin is contrary to His very nature.

While Christ fully shared in our humanity and experienced genuine temptation, Scripture teaches that He remained completely without sin. Hebrews 4:15 says:

“For we do not have a high priest who is unable to sympathize with our weaknesses, but One who has been tempted in every way as we are, yet without sin.”

The phrase “without sin” emphasizes Christ’s absolute sinlessness. Many theologians have therefore argued that Christ was not merely someone who happened to avoid sin, but that, because of His divine nature, He was incapable of sinning.

The reason this matters is that Christ's perfect holiness is essential to His role as our Redeemer. If there were even the possibility of moral corruption within Him, that would raise questions about the perfection of the sacrifice offered for humanity's salvation.

Of course, I may not fully understand your intended portrayal of Taleh, so perhaps I have misunderstood the character. If so, please feel free to correct me. I simply wanted to share this perspective because I care about both good storytelling and sound theology.

Thank you again for your work, and please keep writing! I truly enjoy your comic and look forward to seeing more of it in the future. 😊

LilMissEaster

LilMissEaster 4 days ago

Thanks for your support! The Holy Spirit is in here but he was only briefly mentioned as Iaun who connects all the people to Aryeh in a different dimension. I agree that Jesus is completely without sin, I put a comment that "he mustn't sin otherwise the core will be corrupted" to show that he was the only one able to do this for his people.