Mr. Gray has sworn to achieve the impossible: kill the Devil.
But his fate is sealed by a pact with The Eye, a demon feared as one of the strongest ever to walk the underworld. The terms of the deal are cloaked in silence, its true horror unspeakable.
To break free, Mr. Gray must carve a path through endless legions of demons, each one rising to crush him before he can reach his final target. With every battle he grows more relentless, more dangerous, yet also more human, forging unlikely friendships in the very fires meant to consume him.
This is not just a fight for survival. It is a war against damnation itself.
Not bad but I feel the writing feels too safe, it's also very fast, we don't know anything about this guy other than he wrecks evil with his skills, err also the dialogues are weird a times like him taking off his suit quote was almost cliche, I feel there should be control on the development of the characters that builds the world, I'm sorry it feels very critical but I like the comics and I think it can be much better
@INK-O: I understand what you mean, and I’m working on the character development. The characters are meant to be mysterious, so I’m revealing who they are slowly. I agree that from episode 1 to 4 you don’t really know much about them yet. Episode 5 will start setting that up, and episode 6 will focus more deeply on their development. I appreciate the honest feedback.
@ishh: Thank you, I’m glad you’re enjoying the series and the art. I agree about adding more character development. Episode 5 will lay the foundation, and episode 6 will expand more on who the characters truly are. They’re intentionally mysterious, but I understand that the earlier episodes didn’t show enough yet. More depth is coming.
INK-O 2 weeks ago
Not bad but I feel the writing feels too safe, it's also very fast, we don't know anything about this guy other than he wrecks evil with his skills, err also the dialogues are weird a times like him taking off his suit quote was almost cliche, I feel there should be control on the development of the characters that builds the world, I'm sorry it feels very critical but I like the comics and I think it can be much better
ishh 1 week ago
i love the series so far, imma have to agree that i'd love more character development. otherwise the art is absolutely good
ComicLord 1 week ago
@INK-O: I understand what you mean, and I’m working on the character development. The characters are meant to be mysterious, so I’m revealing who they are slowly. I agree that from episode 1 to 4 you don’t really know much about them yet. Episode 5 will start setting that up, and episode 6 will focus more deeply on their development. I appreciate the honest feedback.
ComicLord 1 week ago
@ishh: Thank you, I’m glad you’re enjoying the series and the art. I agree about adding more character development. Episode 5 will lay the foundation, and episode 6 will expand more on who the characters truly are. They’re intentionally mysterious, but I understand that the earlier episodes didn’t show enough yet. More depth is coming.