Issue 2
Luna Tide Book 1: Chp 2 A Unique Catch
Later that day...Mayume fishes to take her mind off what occurred in town today. Eventually there is a heavy snag on one of their nets that draws the family's attention.

SlipperyClam 1 week ago
Stilted dialogue and a few grammatical errors. I truly wish the creator luck but I'll probably bow out at this time.