listen this is good like real good the art great and panelling is great but the story is definitely something that needs a bit of improvement. I have seen this story a bunch of times (jjk,chainsaw man) just to name a few and finding your inspiration in those stories is fine but you also have to learn to bring your own uniqueness to the table. overall for now this story is just a 7/10 and I hope futher down the author finds some new way to make the story feel a bit more unique to them
POOLS 23 hours ago
peak as always
Callistospiralz 22 hours ago
i agree with pools this is so peak 🥹
miyuman 21 hours ago
I don't think maud's cut out for this😅 she's cooked.
literally.
Kelpiz 20 hours ago
damn, Maud can’t even catch a break😔
argosaxelcaos 19 hours ago (edited 19 hours ago)
This is so good! Still, throwing the kids in the deep end with a "You'll figure it out" sounds like a great way to lose agents.
TacoUnreal 18 hours ago
“Trust your eldritch instincts” yeah right 😭
bunuthebunny 17 hours ago
I also agree with pools this is peak
Love4Life 16 hours ago
This poor girl got thrown straight into the deep end with no floaties. 😭
Docust 15 hours ago
Damnn, i hope she's still alive...
lung-fish19 2 hours ago
listen this is good like real good the art great and panelling is great but the story is definitely something that needs a bit of improvement. I have seen this story a bunch of times (jjk,chainsaw man) just to name a few and finding your inspiration in those stories is fine but you also have to learn to bring your own uniqueness to the table. overall for now this story is just a 7/10 and I hope futher down the author finds some new way to make the story feel a bit more unique to them