In the 90s, on the crime-ridden streets of Saint, Jack — an ordinary teenager with no superpowers — decides to become a hero. After the tragic death of his mother at the hands of a drug addict, he makes a vow to cleanse his neighborhood of violence and decay. No mask, no magic, no backup. Just him, the streets, and the belief that a hero can be real.
I really like how your story flows and how the characters feel alive it kept me hooked from start to finish. If I could suggest something to make it even greater maybe adding a bit more depth to the background or small details about the world could make it feel even more immersive
Btw I have an idea for your comic. Can I draw a cover art for it within my best rate. If you are interested
@RUBYVANCE101: Thank you for the feedback! Which character did you like besides Jack — if you liked him at all? Thanks, but I don't need a cover at the moment.
RUBYVANCE101 2 weeks ago
This comic is so entertaining The artwork is amazing and the story is really engaging I kept reading because I wanted to see what happens next
RevivingMysticalOwl857 2 weeks ago
@RUBYVANCE101: thanks, can you say what actually you like in my story, and what you add to make it greater?
RUBYVANCE101 2 weeks ago
I really like how your story flows and how the characters feel alive it kept me hooked from start to finish. If I could suggest something to make it even greater maybe adding a bit more depth to the background or small details about the world could make it feel even more immersive
Btw I have an idea for your comic. Can I draw a cover art for it within my best rate. If you are interested
RevivingMysticalOwl857 2 weeks ago
@RUBYVANCE101: Thank you for the feedback! Which character did you like besides Jack — if you liked him at all? Thanks, but I don't need a cover at the moment.
RUBYVANCE101 2 weeks ago
To be honest Jack was the only one I really connected with. He stood out the most for me
And I would loved to draw smth for you within my good price