After the death of Kaiβs grandfather, Kai vowed to see his grandfathers dream to make everyone remember his great ancestors legacy. however..that dream is short lived after Kai is transported back in time! now he must cope with being in the 17th century. How will Kai make it back to the 20th century?!
My time has finally come to review my first battle Shonen.
First notes; the art style is fantastic and the composition is great, but I have noticed that some character features tend to flip sides, most notably is the horn on Jiken's mask, it starts on the right side and moves to the left later in the chapter. The pacing is a little fast for an opening chapter. I wish we had a little more time with Jin and Bella so we could connect with them more. I feel like this chapter had 2 places where it could've ended, when Kai get's sent to the past, and when the Golden Mist are introduced. Other than that, I'm loving it
RegaliaComics 2 years ago
This incredible! Can't wait to see more of this!!!!!
ChristopherCarter 1 year ago
this is really cool π
MikaleosK 1 year ago
My time has finally come to review my first battle Shonen.
First notes; the art style is fantastic and the composition is great, but I have noticed that some character features tend to flip sides, most notably is the horn on Jiken's mask, it starts on the right side and moves to the left later in the chapter. The pacing is a little fast for an opening chapter. I wish we had a little more time with Jin and Bella so we could connect with them more. I feel like this chapter had 2 places where it could've ended, when Kai get's sent to the past, and when the Golden Mist are introduced. Other than that, I'm loving it
Zazu 1 year ago
This is awesome keep up the good work
GlowingRedBaron886 1 year ago
im also creating my own manga so your work could really help meπ
PirouettingBreezyRover 1 year ago
noice π
DTComix 1 year ago
incredible enjoying this series!!
Legacycreator97 6 months ago
Yoooooo, had no idea you were on Global Comix too lol!!
nfloyd 2 months ago
This was a great chapter you reeled me right in.
BarteringGentleMinotaur 2 months ago
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CastingMercurialAcademic 1 month ago
this is fire π₯π₯π₯
Kirbon 2 weeks ago
this is awesome