Dive Into Hell: Main Verse-test 01

This comic series shows you a story of two variant characters from another dimension, that they need to survive from another variants of themself by using a magic pen, which the CREATOR gave them. This magic pen can cut the air in half, and after the air that got cut. It will turn into a dimension door. Letting them go through just to hide, travel or do some missions that the CREATOR orders what to do. This comic is a test by the way! You can advise anything for me, so that I can improve. Thanks for reading!