Release #2 - Chapter 2: Just one hit

Following the tragic slaughtering of his entire family, young Boytashi Maru swears an oath to devote himself to the life of a knight, ensuring that peace is kept in the world. But first, Boy must be able to prove himself worthy by passing the squire selections exam. Throughout his journeys Boy will learn what it truly means to be a knight, as well as uncover the truth about his families death.

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2: Chapter 2: Just one hit

55.4K views • Feb 16, 2022

Alric Ebonyx begins Boy's training, with the hopes of sharpening this dull child into proper knight. Time and time again Boy is unable to progress in his his training, and it all begins to seem hopeless.

Isekai-Gale 3 years ago

I really liked this chapter. I liked how you showed the progression of the characters and their development. I also like the little lore drop you did. The shadings pretty good I aspire to draw in that distinct type. Looking forward to what happens next. One thing tho is sometimes the quality could drop which is understandable since your starting out and all and your giving a lot of pages and dialogue but its still nice

smaansson 3 years ago

Your art and story is fun, your character's are charming, but there's an unnecessary amount of dialogue that clutter up the page, most of which is spelled poorly or doesn't flow at all. Please don't feel discouraged, you're still improving!