Release #1 - Chapter 1: Can You Make Me a Knight?
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1: Chapter 1: Can You Make Me a Knight?
323.3K views • Feb 09, 2022
After watching his entire family slaughtered, 10 year old Boytashi Maru mysteriously survives the incident and gets taken in under the care of a supposed stranger.
Who was responsible for killing his parents? Will Boytashi attempt to get revenge?
jmuniz 3 years ago
Not a bad first chapter. I recommend taking another look at the dialogue because I saw some grammatical errors in a couple of pages. Looking forward to see how things develop!
Michaelmacch 3 years ago (edited 3 years ago)
@jmuniz Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm always working to improve my dialogue and fix my mistakes so I really appreciate you helping me out! next chapter drops the 16th, so I hope you continue to read on :)
jmuniz 3 years ago
Of course no problem! Do give my own manga a read on here as well. It's called Omen. We indie creators need to support each other.
Michaelmacch 3 years ago
yeah for sure! Imma be sure to check it out!
Akhoris 3 years ago (edited 3 years ago)
Hello, I'm a huge fan of your work!
I saw your post on reddit about the chapter 3.
It's a really interesting story. Everything I like about shonen are there !
One french GTA RP character (called Nero) look like the protagonist.
Anyway, thank you for sharing your manga, it's inspiring.
Michaelmacch 3 years ago (edited 3 years ago)
@Akhoris yo I really appreciate that for real! Thanks so much for taking the time to read thru my manga and leave a comment, that's means a lot to me :) also fun fact that you mention the name Nero, that's actually the birth given sir name of my MC's adopted brother ;)
Akhoris 3 years ago
@Michaelmacc It's quite a coincidence! <br>Would you mind if I ask you a few questions in private?
Michaelmacch 3 years ago (edited 3 years ago)
@Akhoris yeah for sure no problems! Ask away
Grandfix 3 years ago
Rd
egjevukaj 3 years ago
How do I read it because when I press next it send me to the next chapter
Michaelmacch 3 years ago
To go to the next page, click on the left side of the page :)
LxveRetro 3 years ago
This was actually good for a first chapter and i like the art style only thing i seen wrong was just a tiny few grammatical errors other than that i love it !
Isekai-Gale 3 years ago
Its really good so far. Has okay humor and a pretty good melancholic tone to it. Overall good first chapter
Coolman453 3 years ago
Pretty good! But one thing, the beginning feels a little rushed at times, but over all, nice art, and compelling story.
Swenyar 2 years ago
Great work, I shared it with @comic_support on twitter
ChristopherCarter 2 years ago
@Akhoris: agreed!!