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Preamble No. 1 - Big Brother
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RUBYVANCE101

RUBYVANCE101 Banned User 1 month ago

The atmosphere feels deep and still like it holds a secret How do you create that sense of quiet emotion?

xaviyeen

xaviyeen 3 weeks ago

@RUBYVANCE101: the somber dialogue like the protagonist is venting to himself helped add emotion. Also the onomatopoeia towards the end also builds suspense.

RUBYVANCE101

RUBYVANCE101 Banned User 3 weeks ago

@xaviyeen: Yeah I totally agree The way he talks to himself really makes you feel what he’s going through it adds a lot of depth and emotion and that onomatopoeia at the end definitely amps up the tension you can almost hear the moment unfolding.

Btw you are write or draw this comic by yourself? or commission someone for it

xaviyeen

xaviyeen 1 week ago

I'm illustrating and writing by myself for now! maybe down the line I could hire an editor but only time will tell