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SparkManUltra
story is going on but story is slow mak it litttle bit fast.
TheArchivist
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SparkManUltra
this is amazing
TheArchivist
@SparkManUltra: hello buddy, thank you for coming back. actually this is really bad from my pont of view, that’s the reason i am reworking everything. Still, thanks for your appreciation, don’t miss on reworked chapters when they come out!!
TheArchivist
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⚠️ Question for the Archivists: On Page 10, when Nilo tries to "fix" Kairys with the analog syringe, the System reacts violently with a glitch. In your opinion, was that reaction a DEFENSE mechanism (rejecting foreign hardware) or a PUNISHMENT (forced rewriting)?
The Vault doesn't let go of its assets easily. Drop your theories below. 👇
TheArchivist
[ACCESS LOG]: Grazie per aver aperto il file.
⚠️ Domanda per gli Archivisti: A pagina 10, quando Nilo tenta di "curare" Kairys con la siringa analogica, il Sistema reagisce violentemente con un glitch. Secondo voi, quella reazione era un meccanismo di DIFESA (rigetto di hardware estraneo) o una PUNIZIONE (riscrittura forzata)?
Il Vault non lascia andare i suoi asset facilmente. Scrivete la vostra teoria qui sotto. 👇
DrivingAgent
Woow
TheArchivist
@DrivingAgent: ei! sono contento che ti piaccia ✌🏻 ci vediamo al prossimo capitolo allora!
TheArchivist
Welcome to Sector 0. This is the beginning of a long journey into the Vault. I read every comment, so let me know what you think about the atmosphere. - Giovanni.
SparkManUltra 1 week ago
this story was very good. but you also got very less views. i also wrote story called thrinavi i made first arc comic.
TheArchivist 1 week ago
@SparkManUltra: Ei! tyvm, it’s always good to get some appreciation. I think the problem with my view is due to the fact that the first chapters are bad in quality and narrative, wich is also the reason why im working on an rework. - I would for sure pass and have a look on your work too!!