Kusa
JacksAxe
Fantastic! Loved the beach scene. 🙌
ProtectingPigmentedSeer
I love this story! There’s something rlly sinister and mysterious about it and i cant wait to uncover the truth. more more more!!
DesigningIcyNomad942
WOWWWW
Aetherhane
I need more!!
DrivingDreamyArchitect
very zany
kusa
@SafeguardingDurableSnake: oh i just saw the comment! sorry for the late reply, but thank u for reading!!
FlumpyTripod
I like the "-H-" you had in the speech bubble, nice implication of catching your breath. I like your paneling, it's generally pretty readable, but I will say I do feel like it gets a bit cluttered when there's a lot of characters talking
kusa
@FlumpyTripod: yeah 😅 this was more of a test chapter. hopefully it gets easier for the reader as it progresses (thank you for reading thou!)
kusa
@ShieldingEpicDuchess: thank you! hope you enjoy the story
FlumpyTripod
Very enticing first chapter. There's a lot unexplained going on, and it's all very intriguing. I'm invested







