Battle Chi Comics
Ghost-n-Alens-ENT
Awesome read. Im so happy ObsidainComics put me on to this. glad i checked it out.
ShiningExoticAardvark
OKAY-positives: The ART...is very good. This being free? ALSO good.
NOW...the negatives..."Wow, lesbians really do move fast." The fuck Battle Chi Comics?
Secondly...THE SHOCKSTER?! THAT was the best name you could come up with?! And even WORSE she neither SAYS her superhero name , NOR uses her powers to fight anybody.
Stop waiting until the second issue to start the action, a superhero book needs to START with the action,28 pages of set up is too long.
Seriously, "The Shockster"? That sounds like a gag villain.
ShiningExoticAardvark
You really didn't need to write out the actual alien language, just put carrots on either end and say "Translated into English" in word box.
ShiningExoticAardvark
Uh...Studio Proteus went defunct and was highly criticized for flopping manga, and Tokyopop almost went bankrupt itself.
ShiningExoticAardvark
Uh...Studio Proteus went defunct and was highly criticized for flopping manga, and Tokyopop almost went bankrupt itself.
Edit: Sorry for posting this 3 times, stupid Enter Key.
Either way, traditionally manga is drawn right to left, and barring flopped manga, if was drawn intentionally left to right, its not a manga, its a moe inspired graphic novel.
That's just how I see it though, one Aardvark's opinion.
ShiningExoticAardvark
Okay now THAT was good, very nice period piece, full of action and drama.
ShiningExoticAardvark
Pretty good start, dialogue is a little generic but indicative of the time, although like many modern comics you put too much padding into the origin story, a superhero book needs action. Also it would've been better had Isaac Hulked out and smashed the cop, rather than being saved by a magic white lady, like come on now.
snow122
I really enjoyed your story it’s so unique! You write amazingly. I loved your comic art too did you commission it? If you need an artist, I’d love to create art for your story