Battle Chi Comics
Battle Chi (Pre Release Edit Phase)
Battle Chi Issue 1 (Re Write Unfinished) Edit in Progress
ShiningExoticAardvark
OKAY-positives: The ART...is very good. This being free? ALSO good.
NOW...the negatives..."Wow, lesbians really do move fast." The fuck Battle Chi Comics?
Secondly...THE SHOCKSTER?! THAT was the best name you could come up with?! And even WORSE she neither SAYS her superhero name , NOR uses her powers to fight anybody.
Stop waiting until the second issue to start the action, a superhero book needs to START with the action,28 pages of set up is too long.
Seriously, "The Shockster"? That sounds like a gag villain.
ShiningExoticAardvark
You really didn't need to write out the actual alien language, just put carrots on either end and say "Translated into English" in word box.
magus-maestro216
@ShiningExoticAardvark: Yeah, but it's cooler that way. Shows just how passionate he is about his creation. Besides, do YOU actually think that he he doesn't know that he could forgo it? Did it really bother you that much to make a comment?
ShiningExoticAardvark
Okay now THAT was good, very nice period piece, full of action and drama.
magus-maestro216
😎😎😎👌🏽
SLIMJIM19
this is great, I hope you make it in the comic insustry
magus-maestro216
@ShiningExoticAardvark: Lmao, you're out of your damn mind. What exactly would "Hulking-out" do, besides put a target on his family, smdh? Are you a troll? Maybe just too young and naive..... So he smashes out of the jail (police station jail, not even prison), then what?