Battle Chi Comics
Ghost-n-Alens-ENT
Awesome read. Im so happy ObsidainComics put me on to this. glad i checked it out.
ShiningExoticAardvark
OKAY-positives: The ART...is very good. This being free? ALSO good.
NOW...the negatives..."Wow, lesbians really do move fast." The fuck Battle Chi Comics?
Secondly...THE SHOCKSTER?! THAT was the best name you could come up with?! And even WORSE she neither SAYS her superhero name , NOR uses her powers to fight anybody.
Stop waiting until the second issue to start the action, a superhero book needs to START with the action,28 pages of set up is too long.
Seriously, "The Shockster"? That sounds like a gag villain.
ShiningExoticAardvark
You really didn't need to write out the actual alien language, just put carrots on either end and say "Translated into English" in word box.
ShiningExoticAardvark
...HM-I mean the story has promise, but the artwork while not awful kinda reeks of "This would look better as webtoon than a print comic". Also, unless its read right to left, its not a manga, get it right please.
ArtCrumbs admin
@ShiningExoticAardvark - Manga does not HAVE to be right to left. While the majority of it is, it is not a requirement. There are even Japanese manga that have been made left to right from time to time. Manga is WAY more than just a reading direction.I suggest you read up on manga history and look into organizations like Studio Proteus, Tokyopop, and pre-2000s manga publishers in the USA.
ShiningExoticAardvark
Okay now THAT was good, very nice period piece, full of action and drama.
ShiningExoticAardvark
Pretty good start, dialogue is a little generic but indicative of the time, although like many modern comics you put too much padding into the origin story, a superhero book needs action. Also it would've been better had Isaac Hulked out and smashed the cop, rather than being saved by a magic white lady, like come on now.