Aseftier
21 pages
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Demi mencari kebenaran atas kematian sang Kapten, Zayda nekat menyusup ke gudang timah Belanda. Tindakannya segera memantik...
21 pages
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To uncover the truth behind her captain’s death, Zayda infiltrates a Dutch tin warehouse, only to be caught in a deadly siege.
devinagonistes
Great stuff! The action was exciting and easy to understand. I like how Zayda has developed as a character, she was clearly underestimated by her father’s crew and she has a cool support system in her own right. Well done!
21 pages
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Dua bulan setelah kaptennya terbunuh, Zayda kembali ke Toboali yang kini dijaga ketat.
Demi rakyat, ia menyelundupkan timah...
21 pages
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Two months after the captain was killed, Zayda returned to a heavily guarded Toboali. Smuggling tin for the people, she keeps her...
10 pages
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Dalam satu malam, segalanya runtuh bagi Zayda. Kapal mereka pecah dalam ledakan yang tak berjawab, menyisakan serpih kayu dan...
10 pages
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In a single night, everything fell apart for Zayda. Their ship was torn apart by a sudden blast, leaving only drifting debris on...
JstCswlRdr
You did a great job creating that hot and humid atmosphere, it really makes the scene feel unsettling. But I'm still not quite sure what the comic is going to be about bcs this comic is too short and does not explains or hook anything .
devinagonistes
Great work setting up the story with minimal pages! It seems clear to me that the main thrust of the story will be about the captain’s daughter becoming a pirate queen for revenge and honor. And if I’m wrong, I’m excited to find out! Either way, I’m hooked.