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Release #1 - Chapter 1: Can You Make Me a Knight?

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1: Chapter 1: Can You Make Me a Knight?
25.6k views • Feb 09, 2022
After watching his entire family slaughtered, 10 year old Boytashi Maru mysteriously survives the incident and gets taken in under the care of a supposed stranger. Who was responsible for killing his parents? Will Boytashi attempt to get revenge?
jmuniz

jmuniz 4 months ago

Not a bad first chapter. I recommend taking another look at the dialogue because I saw some grammatical errors in a couple of pages. Looking forward to see how things develop!

Michaelmacc

Michaelmacc 4 months ago (edited 4 months ago)

@jmuniz Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm always working to improve my dialogue and fix my mistakes so I really appreciate you helping me out! next chapter drops the 16th, so I hope you continue to read on :)

jmuniz

jmuniz 4 months ago

Of course no problem! Do give my own manga a read on here as well. It's called Omen. We indie creators need to support each other.

Michaelmacc

Michaelmacc 4 months ago

yeah for sure! Imma be sure to check it out!

Akhoris

Akhoris 3 months ago (edited 3 months ago)

Hello, I'm a huge fan of your work!
I saw your post on reddit about the chapter 3.
It's a really interesting story. Everything I like about shonen are there !
One french GTA RP character (called Nero) look like the protagonist.
Anyway, thank you for sharing your manga, it's inspiring.

Michaelmacc

Michaelmacc 3 months ago (edited 3 months ago)

@Akhoris yo I really appreciate that for real! Thanks so much for taking the time to read thru my manga and leave a comment, that's means a lot to me :) also fun fact that you mention the name Nero, that's actually the birth given sir name of my MC's adopted brother ;)

Akhoris

Akhoris 3 months ago

@Michaelmacc It's quite a coincidence! <br>Would you mind if I ask you a few questions in private?

Michaelmacc

Michaelmacc 3 months ago (edited 3 months ago)

@Akhoris yeah for sure no problems! Ask away

egjevukaj

egjevukaj 2 months ago

How do I read it because when I press next it send me to the next chapter

Michaelmacc

Michaelmacc 2 months ago

To go to the next page, click on the left side of the page :)

LxveRetro

LxveRetro 2 months ago

This was actually good for a first chapter and i like the art style only thing i seen wrong was just a tiny few grammatical errors other than that i love it !

Isekai-Gale

Isekai-Gale 1 month ago

Its really good so far. Has okay humor and a pretty good melancholic tone to it. Overall good first chapter